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The latest tricks to drive open rates and get results

June, 2008
By REGGIE BRADY

Subject lines carry a lot of weight.  They drive open rates and results. After e-mail recipients look at your “from” line and recognize your company or service, the next thing they do is look at the subject line to see what might interest them.

Let’s examine some of the latest techniques for getting customers past the e-mail client and into your site.

Feel free to use “free”

In the past, marketers were warned not to use the word “free” in a subject line.  The concern was that it triggered spam filters and reduced chances of delivery.  Since “free” is the most powerful four-letter word in a marketer’s arsenal, many have continued to experiment and use it. 

Here are two pieces of good news.  First, the ISPs are not putting as much weight behind filtering the word “free.”  And second, “free” increases open rates.  So, if it makes sense for your offer or promotion, try testing “free.” 

Many catalogers offer free shipping from time to time.  This is a guaranteed winner and you’ll want to be sure to highlight this in subject lines.

Keep them short and direct

Long subject lines can be truncated in some email clients.  Keep subject lines between 45 to 50 characters, including spaces.  If you do use a longer subject line, put the most important information first.

EmailLabs has an easy-to-use tool on its Web site that allows you to preview how your from and subject lines appear in various email clients.  It’s worthwhile to check it out at: http://www.emaillabs.com/tools/from_subject_line_tool_popup.html

You may want to keep your subject lines even shorter.  MailerMailer released a subject line study in late 2007 that examined open and click-through rates for subject lines less than 35 characters vs. longer subject lines.  Here are their results:

 

35 characters or less 

 More than 35 characters
Opens 

 23.1%

 18.0%

Clicks

 3.8%

 2.1%


Note:  Since the initial publication of this article an interesting study was released by Alchemy Worx that showed short subject lines do get higher open rates.  However, longer subject lines have higher click-to-open rates.  With a longer subject line you have the room to introduce more than one idea.  This is certainly worth testing.

Spend time crafting subject lines

Too many companies put all their focus on creating their emails, leaving the subject lines as last minute inclusions to the message.

I like the way the cataloger Wine Enthusiast approaches this.  Its marketing head likens a subject line to a catalog cover.  Catalogers know the cover makes a big difference to sales ? a subject line performs the same function. 

Wine Enthusiast’s email copywriter comes up with 10 suggested subject lines. The marketing team reviews them and sometimes comes up with additional ideas.  Once marketing pares the list down to a few winners, the team takes a quarter of the file to do A/B or A/B/C test. 

Tests can include small tweaks.  They tested “Wine Enthusiast Wine Refrigerators” vs. “Our Wine Refrigerators.”  The use of the word “our” provided better results, perhaps because it made a stronger connection between the company and the email recipients.

Speak to me

Think about personalizing your subject lines.  Your recipients’ eyes are naturally drawn to their own names, which focuses attention.  Be judicious about this.  Although it works, that doesn’t mean that every subject line should be personalized.

MailerMailer reported on the impact on results for personalization in subject lines.  The difference turns out to be substantial.

 Personalized subject line  No personalization
 Opens

 18.0%

 15.9%

 Clicks

 6.0%

 2.9%


Many catalogers use urgency in their subject lines. It’s a good tactic to get recipients to act now, rather than letting the e-mail languish in the inbox. Here are some examples of from line and subject line combinations that might stimulate ideas.

Create urgency

Many catalogers use urgency in their subject lines.  It’s a good tactic to get recipients to act now, rather than letting the email languish in the inbox.   Here are some examples of from line and subject line combinations that might stimulate ideas.

From Line 

 Subject Line

 Norm Thompson

 24 hrs left to SAVE 20% on everything!

 Orvis News

 Maximum Savings-Special 1 Week Online Sale

 Hello Direct

 72 Hour Headset Sale extended to Monday!

 FootSmart

 Hurry! Last day for Free Shipping on Spring shoes

 Williams-Sonoma

 Today Only: Free Upgrade to Rush Shipping

 Staples

 $20 coupon + FREE Delivery this week only

 J.Crew

 Final sale: last chance (going once...)

 Dell Small Business

 One day only. Exclusive e-mail sale.

Subject line mistakes

Here are some subject lines that are not as effective as they could be:

“What <i>do</i> Madonna and Guy Ritchie talk about in bed?” 
It’s certainly an intriguing headline, but the effect is ruined with HTML coding.  The mailer attempted to italicize the word “do,” but it didn’t work.

“April exclusives.” 
The cataloger previously used “March exclusives” and “February exclusives,” both of which are too vague.  It would be better to highlight one or two items or categories if you plan to use this tactic.

If you clearly include your branding in the from Line, don’t also include it in your subject line.  It takes up space and gives you less room to motivate your readers. 

Quick tips

Here are additional ideas to incorporate into your subject lines.

  • Use numbers.  They resonate with readers.  Sephora recently ran “37 skin problems, solved!” and Wine Enthusiast utilized “12 Essential Items for Enjoying Wine.”
  • Mix it up.  You’d be well served to vary your subject lines.  Use offers, but also include product specific offers.  Lands End certainly employs promotions in their subject lines, but they also provide value added content on occasion such as “How to find a flattering swimsuit - it's just a few clicks away”
  • Intrigue your readers.  Give them something out of the ordinary.  1-800-Flowers tried “Ill send a Valentine when dogs grow wings...” and Design Within Reach served up “How much pandemonium does your desk hold?”
  • Use evocative words.  BanannaRepublic used “Shimmer in metallics at Piperlime.” J&R used “Immerse Yourself with Great Sound in Our Spring Audio Sale!”
  • Take advantage of seasonal events.  Draper’s and Damon’s played off the spring changing of clocks with “Lose an hour, gain free shipping. Today only!”  Road Runner Sports tried “Happy April Fools' Day!  These deals on 499+ items are no joke!”

Subject lines have the greatest impact on your email's success.  It pays to get them right.

Reggie Brady is president of Reggie Brady Marketing Solutions, a direct and e-mail marketing consultancy in Norwalk, CT. You can reach her at (203) 838-8138 or reginabrady@att.net

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